FW: My edits

Barrett,

You weren’t working off of the last version. I’m sure there aren’t a lot of differences between this one and the one you sent, but e.g. in this version I changed “Wikileaks” to “WikiLeaks” throughout, a few other typo changes, and also asked a handful of add’l marginal questions.

So would the easiest thing to do be for me to you to answer the queries separately? The “WikiLeaks” change I can easily make myself, obviously.

Call me, OK?

-D

Dan Conaway

Literary Agent

Writers House

(212) 696-3825

From: Gregg Housh [mailto:greggatghc@gmail.com]
Sent: Monday, September 05, 2011 11:16 PM
To: Daniel Conaway; Barrett Brown
Subject: My edits

I have attached the last version of the proposal that was sent to me today, the one that I read and used to come up with this list of edits. I doubt either of you need it, but I wanted to make sure everyone knew what file I read to come up with these edits.

Some of these edits were already given and hadn't actually made it in yet. But all of them need to be addressed, including a couple show stoppers. So please get to these edits before it goes out.

I have attached the notes as a text file. I am absolute no good with all these damn word processors or any of their interesting annotation/edit features. So its a text file and it has them all in order.

Gregg