Working on a new version of the first chapter that will be fast-paced first person using the combined events of yesterday from Gregg's standpoint, instead of the Scientology evening originally planned, which would have been hard to do without going into a lot of expository as well. Should have partial draft in tomorrow. Do you have confirmation from Julia on how she wants the toc and any notes from you on how to improve the second chapter draft before turning in to her?