On Page 8:
"a chat server that had come to serve as the group's de facto center of operations"
- This is not right. There were still more than 10 IRC networks doing Anonymous operations and helping to run Anonymous websites in existance at that time. It was one of the main ones, for some of the most public operations, but it wasnt in any way a center of operations. Many ops were still run on other networks. When looking at it in sheer numbers, the majority of ops actually happened on other servers (adding up everything done on every other Anonymous IRC network versus AnonOps.)
On Page 12:
"But every time she tried to put it up".
- We addressed the "she" part in the first sentance, but not in that one. In the first sentance the "woman" was changed to "someone". Could this also get fixed in this sentance?
On Page 27:
The big problem still exists, I have mentioned this edit now multiple times. The proposal cannot go out with this in it. I will paste in what I put in the last round of edits:
"They never actually caught me, per se; instead I was turned in by a neighbor after he got himself arrested while in possession of several kilos of coke and thus had plenty of reason to cooperate."
- As I stated before, not only in my last round of edits, but also on the phone. This CAN NOT appear in anything, even this proposal.
- Here is my note from the last round of edits: This cannot be said, it is under seal and is not actually something we can print without me getting a lot of shit. It should say: "They never actually caught me, per se; instead I was turned in by someone looking for an immunity deal after they were busted earlier.