| Subject: Re: Eh? |
| From: Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> |
| Date: 9/7/11, 16:31 |
| To: Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> |
In response to page 19 query, change sentence to this:
It was so flawed, in fact, that we decided to release it ourselves; and having also soon discovered through other e-mails that Barr had been planning to present this data to the FBI the following Monday, we also put out a press release noting how much trouble the contractor could have caused for innocents who might have ended up the target of a federal probe or even an armed raid as a result of Barr's failures.
More coming in a minute, had to eat.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 2:54 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:Okay, gotcha.On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 2:57 PM, Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> wrote:
Well, Im already doing some addl tinkering, so its probably best if I insert the fixes on MY versionso if you want to just put them all as patches in a single email, w/ page #s, I can tuck them in, then send back the final file to everybody.
From: Barrett Brown [mailto:barriticus@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 3:43 PM
To: Daniel Conaway
Subject: Re: Eh?
Ah, didn't notice those. You want me to just add in fixes all at once and then send back, but call you first if there's any we need to go over by phone?
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 2:37 PM, Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> wrote:
OK, Barrett
So Im going through this now. Can you take a look at the handful of marginal queries in this version and see if there are easy fixes for them? Then you can send me patches, which Ill insert, or you can call me & dictate them to me, either way. That work?
From: Barrett Brown [mailto:barriticus@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 3:13 PM
To: Daniel Conaway
Subject: Re: Eh?
Here you go. Take a look and if you need to make more queries, you can call at will.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 2:16 PM, Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> wrote:
OKand note that there were a few other queries I had too
From: Barrett Brown [mailto:barriticus@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 3:02 PM
To: Daniel Conaway
Subject: Re: Eh?
Damn, I had two of them. Give me a few minutes and I'll integrate the changes I just made into the other one. I've got them all listed here so won't be a problem.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 2:04 PM, Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> wrote:
Barrett, I think this must be the wrong filethe stuff we did over the phone isnt changed in this version.
From: Barrett Brown [mailto:barriticus@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 2:55 PM
To: Daniel Conaway; Anonymous
Subject: Re: Eh?
Okay, here it is, with all of Gregg's edits actually implemented this time as well as the couple of line edits we did over the phone yesterday.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 12:39 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Indeed.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> wrote:
Dont rush, OK? Better that it be clean, truly. And youll be sure to take out that business about Gs neighbor, right?
From: Barrett Brown [mailto:barriticus@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, September 07, 2011 1:31 PM
To: Daniel Conaway
Subject: Re: Eh?
Give me an hour and I'll have it in, something came up suddenly.
On Wed, Sep 7, 2011 at 11:26 AM, Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com> wrote:
Hey, Barrett
I never got the revised proposalcan you send it?
Thanks,
Dan
Dan Conaway
Literary Agent
Writers House
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