My edits
Subject: My edits
From: Gregg Housh <greggatghc@gmail.com>
Date: 9/5/11, 23:15
To: Daniel Conaway <dconaway@writershouse.com>, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>

I have attached the last version of the proposal that was sent to me today, the one that I read and used to come up with this list of edits. I doubt either of you need it, but I wanted to make sure everyone knew what file I read to come up with these edits.

Some of these edits were already given and hadn't actually made it in yet.  But all of them need to be addressed, including a couple show stoppers.  So please get to these edits before it goes out.

I have attached the notes as a text file.  I am absolute no good with all these damn word processors or any of their interesting annotation/edit features.  So its a text file and it has them all in order.

Gregg