Sorry to be such a pest--I went through this again, found a few last clarifications, tried to eliminate some slight duplication...  There's one sentence, where Gregg says that thousands detest him, that I've moved -- let me know if it works in that location...

I've also come up with a list of "comp" titles--if you can think of any others to add, let me know.

Gregg, I do need to know you've read through this before I take it "out" to publishers--which, in theory, I could do tomorrow...

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Dan Conaway
Literary Agent
Writers House