Guys, I'm feeling REALLY excited about this proposal.  This end section (attached) has so much cool stuff in it--really fascinating, often funny, utterly suggestive of the Funhouse that this story contains.

Still, a lot of work to do, as we hone this and fill in the blanks.  I've got some very specific requests / suggestions inserted throughout, so I'll shut up and let you review them yourself.  Can you guys try to get on the phone together once you've both read through all this, talk through what's feasible, how to do it, what's stupid and to be ignored, etc, so that we're certain you're both on the same page here?

And obviously I'm available to discuss anything you'd like to talk about.

Thanks--
Dan

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Dan Conaway
Literary Agent
Writers House