Subject: Yale Essay 1
From: Nikki Loehr <nikki@hip2be.com>
Date: 3/30/11, 16:23
To: barriticus@gmail.com

If you could edit this this evening (~8pm) that would be fantastic.

Also, feel free to cut out shit. It's 1,169 words. It needs to be closer to 600. So, it's like...double. It needs to have at least 1/3 cut out.

PROMPT:
What are your reasons for applying to the Eli Whitney Students Program at Yale? Tell us what personal, professional, or educational experiences influenced your decision to apply. What personal and academic goals do you think Yale can help you to reach?


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