me: thanks, I asked the fellow what jurisdiction and will try to find someone with background in that me: I am sending al-jazeera op-ed now me: Kundra has done a great job so far Clark: Of equal importance to whatever the applicable law might be (if there is any), is what is the remedy for violation of it? If it requires legal proceedings, that means delay and costs -- so maybe he should just find another provider of the services in dispute. Clark: kind of hard to see immediately what 'it' refers to here: the greatest threat to revolution comes not from any state but rather from those who decry it without understanding it Clark: last paragraph and last sentence are really great Clark: is 'reasoned' an apt adjective for 'institutions'? It's more conventionally applied to arguments, written works.2nd paragraph, middle Clark: Not sure if you were asking for comments or just sharing me: hmm me: yeah, that should be changed me: I sent the new version to editor last night after he'd asked for a few more details me: let me see if he asks for still more me: at any rate, it's going to be translated a bunch anyway me: already got a French translation me: oh, Hastings will be on Bill Maher in a little while me: good thing you found him to begin with Clark: i dont think i can access that via the internet, and no TV me: it's okay, we'll get a clip Clark: great, share it widely Clark: some have already began 1st paragrpaph next to last line -- begun? me: will fix that too me: or hopefully they've hired of the three competent working copy editors and will fix themselves me: one of Clark: frequented mostly towards -- unidiomatic , 3rd para, 4th line Clark: looks like it was an incomplete revision, did u originally write 'aimed' or something? Clark: missing quotation mark after 'warfare' 3rd para , middle Clark: yeah, warfare needs to be in quotes, it is a crappy metaphor for all this, colors it with violence, when it is more analogous to 'organizing' in the labor movement of 100+ years ago, or civil disobedience of the suffragettes or the civil rights activists, or demonstrative protest activities such as marches Clark: very good, tweet the fuck out of it when it appears me: okay, I edited and sent in new version to Naz me: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Xiv31-llc4