Scott: barrett, did you see the revised proposed email? me: yes, that did look better than the first Scott: lk me: oh, I just now got this third one, let me give it a look Scott: that one was actually sent to the person Scott: I CCed you and Clark me: should be "from across the globe" me: blogger shouldn't be capitalized me: "any and every" is awkward, replace with "every" Scott: dammnit me: otherwise fine Scott: unfortunately it's too late me: well, doesn't matter that much Scott: you're right though me: I have never come across a businessman who could write a perfectly grammatical letter, so you're in good company Scott: the from I'm disappointed with myself about Scott: the others I'll chalk up to eh me: it's clearly a typo, doesn't matter, he's not going to make a decision based on that assuming he even notices Scott: yes, many people who automatically read it as they think it should be me: my dad thinks maybe is written "may be." Scott: will Scott: may be Scott: any word from Dr Alvarez or Kreiger? me: not yet