Subject: Re: Michael lewis
From: Robert Green <robertogreen@gmail.com>
Date: 9/9/10, 14:36
To: Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>

Re: Michael lewis Ok, sure.  If you go the violent nationalist route you need to avoid the problem colbert had his first year on the show, which was that his target wasn’t clear.  Once he settled on o’reilly his show clicked into great.  If the target of the comedy is douchy US exceptionalism, for instance, then make sure you nail that target.  If it is nationalism in general, make sure that is clear as well.

This is sort of a note I hear from studios all the time, and at its worst it’s “your audience is stupid so talk down to them.”  at its best it’s “you are telling a joke that only you and your friends find funny, so broaden.”

Does that make sense?

Oh, and the comedy of greys qua greys is earned when you get that right as well.  It’s like this, rhythmically:  specific political joke, specific political joke, wacky grey joke.  Repeat.


On 9/9/10 11:32 AM, "Barrett Brown" <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:

Hey, any thoughts on this?

On Wed, Sep 8, 2010 at 5:54 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
I hadn't read the article yet but plan to, have seen links to it around.

Wanted to ask you about the script first before I touch it up - should we just take out the tea party/republican allusions altogether? I've got plenty of other stuff that can be inserted along the main theme of the greys being wacky violent nationalists.


On Wed, Sep 8, 2010 at 5:00 PM, Robert Green <robertgreen@robertgreen.serverdata.net> wrote:
That greece article in VF is insane.  

So, you doing a touch up?