Re: acknowledgement
Subject: Re: acknowledgement
From: Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com>
Date: 7/19/10, 18:09
To: Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>

Thanks, B. I'm running the latest file by a proofreader here to make sure there aren't any others. I think I've become too familiar with it. :)


Rachel Trusheim
Executive Editor
212.244.2084 ext. 111

Sterling & Ross Publishers    | 115 W 29 ST. FL 3   | New York, NY 10001   |   www.sterlingandross.com

On Jul 19, 2010, at 5:59 PM, Barrett Brown wrote:

Hi, Rachel-

Actually, got one last round of edits from Barry Eisler, who just finished the book. I've looked them over and they all seem to be appropriate; have attached them. Thanks for everything.

On Mon, Jul 19, 2010 at 8:37 AM, Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com> wrote:
Hi Barrett,

Are these past 7 emails it? If not, could you please send a word document of any further changes?

Thanks,
Rachel

Rachel Trusheim
Executive Editor
212.244.2084 ext. 111

Sterling & Ross Publishers    | 115 W 29 ST. FL 3   | New York, NY 10001   |   www.sterlingandross.com

On Jul 17, 2010, at 5:25 PM, Barrett Brown wrote:

Also, here:

(he is certainly more
accomplished in this regard than is McCain, who has only
made a handful of implied threats to go to people’s homes
or offices and slap them with a dueling glove, at least in the
couple of months during which I’ve been managed to catch his
act).

The word "been" should be removed.

On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 5:23 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
And this section in the McCain chapter should be in block quotes, as it's currently formatted to appear as if I had written it:

Whipping and branding, Axel? How common were whippings?
How common was branding? Did the slave who had
proven his dilligence, honesty and trustworthiness—and I
think it would be racist to say that slaves were not generally
so—really have to face such treatments? I doubt it.

Do I expect Pitcavage or Brooks or Epperson to suddenly
repent, join their local SCV chapter and start reading Dabney
and Calhoun and Davis? No, I fully expect them to continue in
their current opposition to Western civilization and the Judeo-
Christian tradition, feeding the wolf and hoping to be eaten last.

On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 5:19 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Also, on that same page in McCain chapter:

"and other such topics that white people really spend much time thinking about"

should read

"and other such topics that white people really don't spend much time thinking about"

On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 5:18 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Also in the McCain chapter, I seem to have made an error; where it reads "McCain couldn't seem to get enough of," there's a fissure in there that reads "White's anti-Christian, pro chose to." Please change to "anti-Christian, pro-Communist declarations; he chose to". Thanks again.


On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 5:05 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
There's a similar problem in the McCain chapter, where an AP excerpt is followed by my own observation that "Some threats make it all the way up to the county...." in the same formatting such that it appears to derive from the AP. Thanks.


On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 3:35 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Also, in the same chapter, "The New York Times is possessed with Multiple Personality Disorder" should read "possessed of."


On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 2:00 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Thanks again, Rachel. One last change: in the Krauthammer chapter, when Krauthammer is quoted with quote ending in "declare which camp they belong to?", my "Nope" is formatted such that it looks as if it is Krauthammer saying "Nope," as it's in the same block text/quote format. Thanks.

On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 12:13 PM, Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com> wrote:
Here's the latest copy, with your changes in the text and acknowledgment. Have a great weekend!




Rachel Trusheim
Executive Editor
212.244.2084 ext. 111

Sterling & Ross Publishers    | 115 W 29 ST. FL 3   | New York, NY 10001   |   www.sterlingandross.com

On Jul 17, 2010, at 1:03 PM, Barrett Brown wrote:

Thanks, Rachel.

On Sat, Jul 17, 2010 at 11:57 AM, Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com> wrote:
OK, no problem! 

Rachel Trusheim
Executive Editor
212.244.2084 ext. 111

Sterling & Ross Publishers    | 115 W 29 ST. FL 3   | New York, NY 10001   |   www.sterlingandross.com

On Jul 17, 2010, at 11:56 AM, Barrett Brown wrote:

Can you also change the acknowledgement to read "To my parents," rather than just my mom?




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