| Subject: New post is GREAT -- two quick edits |
| From: Karen Lancaster <lancaster.karen@gmail.com> |
| Date: 5/7/10, 12:07 |
| To: Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> |
This is fabulous -- you need to send it to someone BIG and change title to
A non-believer declares jihad against all the rest
(Dont use Athiest, use Non-believer in whatever better title you can come up with)
Also two edits, both in first paragraph:
As a longtime humorist for such outlets at (should be as)
because he likes to have cocktails with a person targeted for criticism therein;
(you ended sentence with semicolon instead of period)