Re: OK
Subject: Re: OK
From: Selena Leong <selenaleong@gmail.com>
Date: 5/5/10, 17:16
To: Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>

yo i think you might need to change yours more than i need to change mine - i think from a creep standpoint mine is pretty open/obvious and much more geared to a sex column.  yours is more flippant and irreverent.

this is merely my opinion.

On Wed, May 5, 2010 at 5:07 PM, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Howdy-

Okay, will revise this and get back to you ASAP.


On Wed, May 5, 2010 at 4:41 PM, arathe <ARathe@manhattanmedia.com> wrote:
Hi guys,

       I want the story to run next week, which means I need to get a finalized version done by Friday. I am attaching what I have now—both sides of the copy in one doc to make things easier. I have left notes for both of you in the copy, but also want to ask that you read each other's work and try to address the same topics; it doesn't seem, at the moment, that we're telling exactly the same stories. Also, I'd like a bit more about how this felt, what you were thinking, etc. Even the most seasoned swordsman might be put off by this request, so I think the fun will be in sharing that part of the experience...

Adam




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