To: Selena Leong <selenaleong@gmail.com>, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>
Hi guys,
I want the story to run next week, which means I need to get a finalized version done by Friday. I am attaching what I have nowboth sides of the copy in one doc to make things easier. I have left notes for both of you in the copy, but also want to ask that you read each other's work and try to address the same topics; it doesn't seem, at the moment, that we're telling exactly the same stories. Also, I'd like a bit more about how this felt, what you were thinking, etc. Even the most seasoned swordsman might be put off by this request, so I think the fun will be in sharing that part of the experience...
