Re: Hot, Fat & Clouded
Subject: Re: Hot, Fat & Clouded
From: Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>
Date: 12/8/09, 16:07
To: Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com>

I should have the draft finished within a week, as these other chapters are much closer to completion than the Friedman one was; had been incredibly for a while lately with other projects as I've had to provide financial assistance to a family member over the last six months or so and have had several roommates lose jobs thus requiring me to front them, in turn requiring me to do a bunch of time-wasting copywriting nonsense, but I've got the next couple weeks clear so that I can get the book into as good a shape as possible. The draft I get to you in a week should be pretty much the final version; I just find that if I go over it afterwards, I can make significant improvements to the flow and style and whatnot with just a few tweaks here and there.

Speaking of which, do you think Drew might be able to give me half of the second round of the advance ($500 from the $1000 to be paid upon completion) tomorrow if I came to pick it up? If not, that's totally cool; just thought I'd ask, as I think I'm about to get overdrafted when my landlord cashes my check. Vanity Fair takes its sweet, ostentatious time getting me my money. Anyway, let me know, please.

On Tue, Dec 8, 2009 at 3:49 PM, Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com> wrote:
Got it and love it...I'm going to send this and perhaps a portion from Friedman and Bennett to the sales team. Now for the next big question....when do you think you'll have a book draft?

Rachel Trusheim
Executive Editor
212.244.2084 ext. 111

Sterling & Ross Publishers    | 115 W 29 ST. FL 3   | New York, NY 10001   |   www.sterlingandross.com

On Dec 8, 2009, at 3:36 PM, Barrett Brown wrote:

Okay, just shared the intro with you. It might work well as an excerpt after all. Let me know what you think.

On Tue, Dec 8, 2009 at 3:08 PM, Rachel Trusheim <rachel@sterlingandross.com> wrote:
OK great. Just let me know when it's posted.

Thanks!

Rachel Trusheim
Executive Editor
212.244.2084 ext. 111

Sterling & Ross Publishers    | 115 W 29 ST. FL 3   | New York, NY 10001   |   www.sterlingandross.com

On Dec 8, 2009, at 2:49 PM, Barrett Brown wrote:

Okay, sharing the intro chapter with you in a couple minutes. One thing regarding the Friedman chapter - I accidentally wrote that his intro to his shitty book was called A World Album. That's a typo, should be "word album." I'll change it on the shared document but wasn't sure if you'd already downloaded it off of the internet web network net.