Subject: Re: Essay Comments
From: "Barrett Brown" <barriticus@gmail.com>
Date: 1/13/09, 11:16
To: "Jonathan Levine" <jonathan.levine@thomasriggs.net>

Okay, I'll send in a longer version of the Hungtington entry a bit later today.

Thanks,

Barrett Brown
Brooklyn, NY
512-560-2302

On Tue, Jan 13, 2009 at 10:06 AM, Jonathan Levine <jonathan.levine@thomasriggs.net> wrote:
In reply to your first batch of 12 submitted essays....

I like these entries because they have more written substance and do not rely on so many bulleted lists.

Huntington falls under 800 words, should be expanded:  plenty of other ideas for material available in the Wikipedia entry.

No other problems noted.

Jonathan Levine
Project Editor
Thomas Riggs & Company
jonathan.levine@thomasriggs.net