Re: Experienced Humor Writer

On 8/27/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:

Hi, Sati-

Actually, I've still got to finish up a few things today but will have
a script for you tomorrow.

Thanks,

Barrett

On Wed, Aug 27, 2008 at 10:33 AM, Sati Achath <satiachath@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Thank you Barrett. Wonderful. I look forward tohearing from you.
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
>
> Sati
>
>
> On 8/27/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Okay, this shouldn't be a problem at all. I have to finish something
>> up this morning, but will get back to you with a short script later
>> after lunch.
>>
>> Barrett
>>
>> On Wed, Aug 27, 2008 at 8:35 AM, Sati Achath <satiachath@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >
>> > Thank you Barrett. That will be great.
>> >
>> >
>> > Best regards,
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Sati
>> >
>> >
>> > On 8/27/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >>
>> >> Hi, Sati-
>> >>
>> >> Sure, I'll take a look at this and give it some thought and will get
>> >> back to you a bit later in the day.
>> >>
>> >> Regards,
>> >>
>> >> Barrett Brown
>> >>
>> >> On Wed, Aug 27, 2008 at 8:31 AM, Sati Achath <satiachath@gmail.com>
>> >> wrote:
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > Dear Barrett,
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > Hello, how are you? Good Morning.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > A few days ago, as I was going for a walk, I got an idea regarding
>> >> > the
>> >> > script on celebrities and animated images.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > Is it possible that you can conceive some humorous  idea on some
>> >> > current
>> >> > topic  (which has a shelf value of at least 1 or 2 years say, oil
>> >> > price,
>> >> > inflation, immigration etc), and how those past presidents,
>> >> > entertainment
>> >> > celebrities, and other celebrities would react/comment on them. May
>> >> > be
>> >> > it
>> >> > can be on two topics, one for presidents and politicians and the
>> >> > other
>> >> > topic
>> >> > for entertainment celebrities.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > I have already done the CD of the commentary done by a voice over
>> >> > specialist
>> >> > in New Jersey. Actual voices of personalities (eg. Kennedy's "Don't
>> >> > ask
>> >> > what
>> >> > the country can do for you etc, and Regan's "Mr. Gorbachev, tear down
>> >> > this
>> >> > Wall etc.), and animal voices are also integrated into the
>> >> > commentary.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > In the new story/script  that I proposing now, I would like to add
>> >> > actual
>> >> > voices of  Kennedy, Reagan et all.  I think by visiting YouTube you
>> >> > may
>> >> > get
>> >> > some relevant quotes which could be incorporated into the story. I
>> >> > think
>> >> > that will be a great hit!
>> >> >
>> >> > On the other hand, if this task will mean lot of work/trouble for
>> >> > you,
>> >> > as
>> >> > there are too many personalities in my repertoire, it may be
>> >> > difficult
>> >> > to
>> >> > come up with jokes for each one of them. In that case, for the time
>> >> > being I
>> >> > will continue to use my current script and original quotes from
>> >> > Kennedy,
>> >> > Reagan etc.
>> >> >
>> >> > Kindly let me know your views on this suggestion.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > My current script is attached for your review.
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > Best regards,
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > Sati
>> >> >
>> >> >
>> >> > On 8/21/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>
>> >> >> Sati-
>> >> >>
>> >> >> Sorry to hear that; I didn't realize that the script was so
>> >> >> action-packed.
>> >> >> Good luck with everything, and let me know if you would like to
>> >> >> discuss
>> >> >> future projects.
>> >> >>
>> >> >> Regards,
>> >> >>
>> >> >> Barrett Brown
>> >> >>
>> >> >> On Thu, Aug 21, 2008 at 6:21 PM, Sati Achath <satiachath@gmail.com>
>> >> >> wrote:
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> Dear Barrett,
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> Hello. Between the 2 short-listed scripts that  I had sent to my
>> >> >>> agent,
>> >> >>> he preferred to choose the other one. He liked your concept and
>> >> >>> story
>> >> >>> but he
>> >> >>> thinks that it may be difficult to translate the story into action
>> >> >>> with only
>> >> >>> 2 hands. On the other hand, the one he prefers is a simple,
>> >> >>> straight
>> >> >>> forward
>> >> >>> animal farm story, which will be easier to perform.
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> I am sorry to give you this bad news. Honestly, I was very much
>> >> >>> excited
>> >> >>> about your novel concept. May be I will get back to you in due
>> >> >>> course
>> >> >>> to
>> >> >>> experiment with your full story as well. Also, I have an idea to
>> >> >>> revamp my
>> >> >>> script on celebrities and animated images, for which I may seek
>> >> >>> your
>> >> >>> services.
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> Thank you once again for your input and ideas.
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> Sati
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>>
>> >> >>> On 8/21/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> Hi, Sati-
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> Ha, very nice. Are you still in the running for that competition?
>> >> >>>> We'll
>> >> >>>> need to write you some humorous responses for some of the more
>> >> >>>> typical
>> >> >>>> questions you get from TV hosts and that sort of thing.
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> I'm located in Brooklyn, just ten minutes east of lower Manhattan.
>> >> >>>> Checked out your page this morning; I see you hold one of those
>> >> >>>> World
>> >> >>>> Bank
>> >> >>>> jobs of the sort for one often sees classified ads in The
>> >> >>>> Economist.
>> >> >>>> You
>> >> >>>> must be a busy guy.
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> A bit more about me in case your agent needs to know - my first
>> >> >>>> book,
>> >> >>>> Flock of Dodos: Behind Modern Creationism, Intelligent Design, and
>> >> >>>> the
>> >> >>>> Easter Bunny, was released last year to praise from Alan
>> >> >>>> Dershowitz,
>> >> >>>> Rolling
>> >> >>>> Stone, Air America Radio, Skeptic, and other sources, and my work
>> >> >>>> has
>> >> >>>> appeared in dozens of humor publications, public policy journals,
>> >> >>>> trade
>> >> >>>> pubs, and regional magazines, among other things. I also serve as
>> >> >>>> senior
>> >> >>>> copywriter for a production company called Texodus Media based
>> >> >>>> here
>> >> >>>> in
>> >> >>>> Brooklyn, serve as communications director for a PAC based in New
>> >> >>>> Jersey,
>> >> >>>> and do a few other odds and ends elsewhere.
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> Talk to you soon,
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> Barrett
>> >> >>>>
>> >> >>>> On Thu, Aug 21, 2008 at 6:54 AM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>> <satiachath@gmail.com>
>> >> >>>> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> Good Morning Barrett.
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> From the following link, you can watch my hand shadows act, which
>> >> >>>>> was
>> >> >>>>> aired recently in NBC's America's Got Talent program.
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> http://www.AsianOcean.com/agt
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> Alternatively, you can also see it at:
>> >> >>>>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dbvwr1Oxhus
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> PS: Where are you located?
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>>
>> >> >>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>> Sounds good. Of course, the final script would be much better.
>> >> >>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>> Thanks,
>> >> >>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>> Barrett
>> >> >>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 9:59 PM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>>>> <satiachath@gmail.com>
>> >> >>>>>> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>> Thank you Barrett for your sample script.  That's brilliant,
>> >> >>>>>>> and I
>> >> >>>>>>> really liked it.
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>> Let me send it to my talent agent and see what he has to say. I
>> >> >>>>>>> shall
>> >> >>>>>>> get back to you tomorrow.
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> Sati-
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> Actually, never mind about the voices. Here is my sample:
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> Aristotle said that man is a political animal. But about the
>> >> >>>>>>>> animals
>> >> >>>>>>>> themselves? They are, of course, even more political, which is
>> >> >>>>>>>> to
>> >> >>>>>>>> say, even
>> >> >>>>>>>> more insufferable.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> And here we have a local neighborhood association meeting
>> >> >>>>>>>> somewhere
>> >> >>>>>>>> in the Animal Kingdom, which is, incidentally, a
>> >> >>>>>>>> constitutional
>> >> >>>>>>>> monarchy.
>> >> >>>>>>>> The provinces have quite a bit of discretion.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> Here we have the Hen, who presides over the meeting by virtue
>> >> >>>>>>>> of
>> >> >>>>>>>> her
>> >> >>>>>>>> sheer loudness. The Hen announces that the neighborhood has a
>> >> >>>>>>>> budget surplus
>> >> >>>>>>>> this year. So, how shall they spend it?
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The rabbit stands up to speak. He believes the surplus ought
>> >> >>>>>>>> to
>> >> >>>>>>>> be
>> >> >>>>>>>> spent on little pieces of corn and melon and perhaps a sign
>> >> >>>>>>>> forbidding
>> >> >>>>>>>> children from picking up rabbits and carrying them around in
>> >> >>>>>>>> an
>> >> >>>>>>>> uncomfortable fashion.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The tiger stands up next. He proposes that the surplus be
>> >> >>>>>>>> spent
>> >> >>>>>>>> on
>> >> >>>>>>>> rabbit traps.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The cobra stands up well, rather slithers up. He says that
>> >> >>>>>>>> the
>> >> >>>>>>>> surplus ought to be spent on public transportation for cobras.
>> >> >>>>>>>> He
>> >> >>>>>>>> also
>> >> >>>>>>>> seconds the motion regarding rabbit traps.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The rabbit stands up. Then he runs off.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The giraffe stands up over everyone else. He gets plenty of
>> >> >>>>>>>> respect
>> >> >>>>>>>> for this, incidentally. The other animals are impressed by
>> >> >>>>>>>> tallness. This is
>> >> >>>>>>>> what the pollsters have been telling him, anyway. Otherwise,
>> >> >>>>>>>> he
>> >> >>>>>>>> would be
>> >> >>>>>>>> short. At any rate, the giraffe proposes that the meeting be
>> >> >>>>>>>> adjourned and
>> >> >>>>>>>> that cobra and tiger both be investigated for taking illegal
>> >> >>>>>>>> campaign
>> >> >>>>>>>> contributions immediately.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The duck seconds the motion.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The hen rules it into law.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> The cobra and the tiger run off to some foreign country with
>> >> >>>>>>>> which
>> >> >>>>>>>> the Animal Kingdom has a non-extradition treaty.
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> See, democracy works!
>> >> >>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 8:35 PM, Barrett Brown
>> >> >>>>>>>> <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>> Sati, will have this sample to you in a bit, but need to know
>> >> >>>>>>>>> if
>> >> >>>>>>>>> you can do voices - not imitations, but can you do different
>> >> >>>>>>>>> voices for
>> >> >>>>>>>>> different animals?
>> >> >>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 8:11 PM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>>>>>>> <satiachath@gmail.com>
>> >> >>>>>>>>> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>> Thank you Barrett.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>> I look forward to hearing from you.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> Okay, I will go ahead and think up five or six more lines
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> for
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> your consideration this evening (these would not actually
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> in the final
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> script, as I still need to think up a good plot). Don't
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> worry
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> about the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> constraints of shadow puppets; most of this will be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> dialogue
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> and simple
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> movement, but of course I will leave the latter in your
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> hands,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> pun sort of
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> intended.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> Barrett
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 8:05 PM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>> <satiachath@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you Barrett for your clarification. I totally agree
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> with
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> your line of thinking, and I am excited about this
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> humorous
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> concept. So
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> kindly go ahead and please come up with some more lines.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> So far I have received about 30 responses, and already 6-7
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> persons have sent me their samples. But honestly, I am
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> most
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> impressed with
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> your story line. In fact, this is the type of story that I
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> had in mind and
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> was looking for. But the only thing is that after you have
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> done the story, I
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> should be in a position to translate them into action with
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> my
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> hands!
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> I look forward to hearing from you.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Regarding the election, I agree with you, and didn't mean
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> to
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> convey that it would be based on this particular
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> election;
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> it would be, as
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> you say, akin to Animal Farm insomuch as that it would be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> a
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> humorous
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> metaphor about politics and social interaction in general
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> (but unlike Animal
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Farm insomuch as that no animal will represent any
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> particular person, and
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> particularly not Trotsky and Stalin!). So it would be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> something you would be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> able to use beyond November. If you still want to go with
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> that idea, I would
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> like to do it, and will provide you with some more
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> samples
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> based on that
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> theme a bit later this evening. Let me know what you
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> think.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Barrett
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 7:46 PM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <satiachath@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you Barrett for your sample lines. Your idea of
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> holding
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> an election is great, and  I think you are on the right
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> track. But at the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> same time, as I am preparing the act for a longer time
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> (beyond November), it
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> will be better to avoid the presidential election  which
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> is
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> in Nov. But we
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> can put it as a local election or an election in the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> animal
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> kingdom,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> something similar to George Orwell's Animal Farm. If you
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> can kindly come up
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> with another 3-4 lines for other animals, that will be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> great.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you once again for your input and ideas.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, Sati-
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> For the general storyline, I would have the animals
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> holding
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> an election. This would be very well-received for the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> next
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> few months, what
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> with our own upcoming election. Also, Americans love
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> political humor in
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> general. Now, for some sample rewrites:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "In Hinduism, the cow is a symbol of wealth, strength,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> abundance, selfless giving and a full Earthly life.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Think
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> of the cow as the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Barack Obama of the animal kingdom."
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> "Miss Kitty Cat has just arrived back from England. How
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> are
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you, Miss Kitty Cat? Oh, she is limping. She was caught
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> up
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> in a football
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> riot. I told you, Miss Kitty Cat, it is best to stick
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> to
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Big Ben."
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Let me know what you think.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Barrett Brown
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 6:10 PM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <satiachath@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you Barrett for your positive response.  I look
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> forward to hearing from you.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sure, Sati. I'll take a look at this and get back to
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> later this evening.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Barrett
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 20, 2008 at 6:07 PM, Sati Achath
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <satiachath@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hello. Thank you Barrett for your prompt response. I
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> am
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> attaching my current script. I am looking for a
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> thorough overhauling of the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> script with a humorous spin on it, or a totally new
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> story line/approach.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> My target audience are adults, and I will be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> performing
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for corporate clients. The major part of my act will
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> be
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> showing images of
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> celebrities and other personalities.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> If you can kindly let me know your story line about
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> the
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> animals, and write one or two sentences on any  5 or
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 6
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> images out of 22,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> that will be great. That will help me to take a
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> decision.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Considering that the script is a brief one lasting
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 5-6
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> minutes, my budget is only $100.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Kindly let me know in case you will be interested.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Best regards,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sati
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On 8/20/08, Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> wrote:
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Howdy-
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I'd like to be considered for your project. I write
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> for
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> National Lampoon and other outlets, and have
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> otherwise
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> worked in humor on
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> and off for most of my life. I've done a little
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> script
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> writing, too. If
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you'd like to talk, let me know.
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thanks,
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Barrett Brown
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 512-560-2302
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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