Thomas: it allows a lot of room to work with Thomas: i agree me: it sets up everything me: good stuff, will work well as the semi-serious backbone of the film, I think Thomas: what'd you think of elizabeth? Thomas: hmm. not quite, but I think once a rough sample is put together completely. looked at from beginning to end, we'll know more specifically what it needs or not me: right. did you get all the scenes you need? Thomas: something we can add and edit from ... Thomas: I'm trying to finish a first draft script by saturday Thomas: i think i can edit the stuff we've got into about a seven minute short, along with graphics and what not me: yeah, I think splicing my scene and whatever else you've got around actual narrative would be pretty well-receieved