Hi, guys-

The first and third instances are meant to be intentionally humorous
sentence constructions, and the second is indeed all part of the
quote.

Thanks,

Barrett

On Nov 20, 2007 9:17 PM, Gil Gaudia <jggaudia@comcast.net> wrote:

All of the statements in blue fonts are only our opinion.  You may choose to
ignore them.

We felt that the following was an excessive, even too "cutesy" use of
hyphenation:

"bunch-of-cars-driving
around-individually-without-a-care-in-the-world-through-a-very-dangerous-region-where-anti-U.S.-sentiment-is-high-and-everyone-is-armed,"

The following did not seem clear.  Is it all part of the quote?

"This booklet is exceedingly brief and condensed. The reader is advised to
read it a second time. This disclosure is so amazing, so different from the
common conception, you probably did not really grasp it all the first
reading."



 It seemed to us that the "it" was awkward below:

"If we measure the success of a prophet by how wrong he can be for how long
he can be it"

Gil and Jeanne



----- Original Message -----
From: "Barrett Brown" <barriticus@gmail.com>
To: "Gil Gaudia" <jggaudia@comcast.net>
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2007 5:33 PM
Subject: Re: Your AAM Article

Hi-

There don't seem to be any comments associated with any of the blue
font bits except for the final one with regards to the phrase "jump
the shark," which is a term designating a television show as having
overstayed its welcome.

Thanks,

Barrett Brown

On Nov 16, 2007 8:44 PM, Gil Gaudia <jggaudia@comcast.net> wrote:

Please examine the attached article and respond to the items in blue
font.

Gil and Jeanne Gaudia