All of the statements in blue fonts are only our opinion.  You may choose to ignore them.

We felt that the following was an excessive, even too "cutesy" use of hyphenation:

"bunch-of-cars-driving around-individually-without-a-care-in-the-world-through-a-very-dangerous-region-where-anti-U.S.-sentiment-is-high-and-everyone-is-armed,"

The following did not seem clear.  Is it all part of the quote?

"This booklet is exceedingly brief and condensed. The reader is advised to read it a second time. This disclosure is so amazing, so different from the common conception, you probably did not really grasp it all the first reading."



It seemed to us that the "it" was awkward below:

"If we measure the success of a prophet by how wrong he can be for how long he can be it"

Gil and Jeanne


----- Original Message ----- From: "Barrett Brown" <barriticus@gmail.com>
To: "Gil Gaudia" <jggaudia@comcast.net>
Sent: Tuesday, November 20, 2007 5:33 PM
Subject: Re: Your AAM Article

Hi-

There don't seem to be any comments associated with any of the blue
font bits except for the final one with regards to the phrase "jump
the shark," which is a term designating a television show as having
overstayed its welcome.

Thanks,

Barrett Brown

On Nov 16, 2007 8:44 PM, Gil Gaudia <jggaudia@comcast.net> wrote:

Please examine the attached article and respond to the items in blue font.

Gil and Jeanne Gaudia