Re: Content for Events & Design Website

Hi, Erika-

Sorry again about the delay. Attached, you'll find the revised copy.
Some of the sections are re-written, while others I left in basically
intact while just fixing up a few issues and changing a couple of
words around.

Regarding a couple of notes you included: you should definitely
provide a list of organizations for your My Clients bar along with the
nature of the events you did if you can. Also, I took out the short
paragraph under "Reputation," as it was fairly redundant to the rest
of the text - although that might be a good place to put any
testimonials you have on hand, along with a sentence or two
introducing them. If you'd like, e-mail me some info on your client
list and any testimonials you have and I can format them for you and
write introductory text.

Let me know what you think.

Thanks,

Barrett

Notes:

Definitely provide a list of organizations, and perhaps the nature of
the events.

Reputation  took out, redundant. Might replace with testimonials if
you have them, or use that for a listing of clients you've done events
for.

On Nov 8, 2007 11:15 AM, Erika Mannke <erika.mannke@sbcglobal.net> wrote:

No Problem!

Thanks
Erika


Barrett Brown <barriticus@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi, Erika-

Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. I had something important
come up unexpectedly this week, but I'll definitely be finished with
revising this text tomorrow.

Thanks,

Barrett

On Nov 1, 2007 8:17 AM, Erika Mannke wrote:

Hello Barrett,

Attached is my website content for your review.

I have everything listed in the order I think is appropriate for the menu
bar. Please feel free to change the listing and/or text. It should be easy
to follow, but feel free to call me with any questions. I am out of pocket
most of the day today and I know you are traveling.

I have two Bios for you to look at. I'm not wild about either of them, so
I'm interested to see what you think.

Have a nice time in Dallas and we can talk later.

Thank you!
Erika
713-254-3178 cell