Subject: Re: Submission: "My Hand Shall Be Against the Prophets"
From: EllJhns8@aol.com
Date: 8/22/07, 10:57
To: barriticus@gmail.com


In a message dated 8/21/07 6:28:57 PM, barriticus@gmail.com writes:


I'm not crazy about it either, but I'd have difficulty making it any shorter, so splitting it into two might be the only way to go if it can't be printed in its entirety. If the first article ends at the *** after Rosenberg's quote about "a great spiritual awakening," and the second one begins immediately afterwards with "The first great prophet of the 20th century...," then each resulting piece could work pretty well on its own; the only change that would need to be made is replacing the passing mention of "Rosenberg" in the second piece with "CNN mainstay Joel C. Rosenberg" or some such.


I really don't want to split it.  I'm going to try to run it as is. 

Ellen



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