Subject: Re: Submission: "My Hand Shall Be Against the Prophets"
From: "Barrett Brown" <barriticus@gmail.com>
Date: 8/16/07, 16:49
To: "EllJhns8@aol.com" <EllJhns8@aol.com>

I'll just send along another head shot when I get it, probably around the 30th or so. I'll get back to you later in the week regarding the possibility of shortening the other pieces; it can most likely be done. And I'll send along the tweaked version of the prophets piece this weekend or around abouts.

On 8/16/07, EllJhns8@aol.com <EllJhns8@aol.com> wrote:
Great photo.  But if we extract your photo it's not a very friendly look on you. But you do have a handsome look - so you decide. 
   The attached articles look great.  I can't wait to read them.  Is there a possibility of shortening them a bit, althought I'd hate to lose one precious word.  Maybe we can serialize them.  If they aren't shortened I won't have any choice. 
  Attached is your article with questionable wording in red.  The notes were to myself as I was reading it. 

Thanks again,  Ellen
   
  


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