Subject: Re: Submission: "My Hand Shall Be Against the Prophets"
From: EllJhns8@aol.com
Date: 8/16/07, 16:32
To: barriticus@gmail.com

Great photo.  But if we extract your photo it's not a very friendly look on you. But you do have a handsome look - so you decide. 
   The attached articles look great.  I can't wait to read them.  Is there a possibility of shortening them a bit, althought I'd hate to lose one precious word.  Maybe we can serialize them.  If they aren't shortened I won't have any choice. 
  Attached is your article with questionable wording in red.  The notes were to myself as I was reading it. 

Thanks again,  Ellen
   
  


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